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Post by viceroy489 on Dec 8, 2006 18:26:22 GMT -5
The Pain flowed as free are the blood The blood Freinds lost Freinds that where never to be All of it gone The blood stoped flowing it is time to be
Reborn
There will be more
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Post by viceroy489 on Dec 8, 2006 19:08:18 GMT -5
The Cry of Raven The night has began The darkness stets in The temp cools to just above 0 but it doses not mater I am still warm
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Post by lordloveless on Dec 8, 2006 23:16:38 GMT -5
Reborn? Indeed.
Aside from your half hearted attempts to make this look professional, I have to say they are interesting. I say interesting because I do not judge poetry, I call it not good and I call it not bad. Poetry is simply a reflection of one's soul onto paper, or a computer monitor.
In this reflection I see one who hath been tormented and wishes for release. Release cannot be gained by letting one's own blood flow. Nay, one must let the blood of their enemies flow instead.
If you truley are reborn, and no longer wish to be that which you once were (a normal) then contact me. I can teach you many things, "Dark Raven".
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Post by Malum on Dec 9, 2006 12:31:47 GMT -5
Loveless, I don't know if it would be wise for you to take Alex under your wing...
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Post by Mayhem on Dec 9, 2006 13:51:40 GMT -5
He may become a great enemy of the Epathetics and their cause... Loveless, be careful. He may grow more powerful than you and Alice.
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Post by kroova on Dec 9, 2006 16:55:05 GMT -5
He may become a great enemy of the Epathetics and their cause... Loveless, be careful. He may grow more powerful than you and Alice. Oh yeah? Because for some reason I believe it more along the lines of bringing out crappier poems about how hes emo. Maybe he'll construct a post that wouldnt destroy Word with all its errors, but I'll still shit on him.
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Post by Mayhem on Dec 9, 2006 17:20:39 GMT -5
Ha, The Order of the Heartless will numb him. He won't feel any emotions.
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Post by viceroy489 on Dec 11, 2006 18:46:57 GMT -5
I would find it intriguing to join the order of the heartless
Into the Darkness The Raven shell fly off into a nether land a land of darkness there is peace in this land of Darkness
The darkness fosters peace there is no need for justest there are no laws all there like to be alone away from the world the darkness has peace
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Post by lordloveless on Dec 11, 2006 21:40:08 GMT -5
Send me a personal message.
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Post by viceroy489 on Dec 11, 2006 22:28:05 GMT -5
He walks the via media never helping never doing wrong He can never fit in but He has Friends They all like something similar to him All ways the dark horse Fads go around him the do not strike him worlds go by as he reads about almost anything some people laugh at him most just pass on by
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Post by kroova on Dec 12, 2006 8:52:52 GMT -5
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Post by viceroy489 on Dec 12, 2006 17:33:32 GMT -5
Some people have no creatively
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Post by kroova on Dec 12, 2006 17:52:42 GMT -5
Some people have no creatively Odd how you said this... Because today in Study hall I took an extra 20 minutes of my day, just for you. If you think of a title, tell me. I find myself reading this forum day by day, feel warm Until I met a man who owed a penance Because he had a grammatical error in every sentence He went by the name of Raven This always left me cravin' I tried not to take a shit Every day, closer to planning a hit Now being shipped off he goes Free with Loveless to release his woes Now take this as a eulogy and heed my final plea: Stop being a fag Because I ran out of rhymes Orange.
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Post by Mayhem on Dec 12, 2006 17:54:16 GMT -5
Now, was that a dig on yourself?
If so, I must agree. I know my poems suck because they were written by a hormonal 13 year old girl with not friends. Your's are forced.
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Post by viceroy489 on Dec 12, 2006 18:03:58 GMT -5
that was a wast of your time Alek
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