Post by The Admin on May 8, 2006 20:04:55 GMT -5
Here's an idea for a story. (I posted a very incomplete version a while back) Tell me how you like it and what I should change.
It starts out in a futuristic world where two teenage buddies are on a school feild trip. These kids are way smarter than the other kids and so their kind of in their own little world. They are touring a futuristic super-computer lab. (or something along those lines) One of the kids makes eye contact with thier teacher and sees her mouth, "Sorry," In seconds, the two are being physically forced into another region of the lab. One of the boys managed to read a sing labled, "Artificial Inteligence" They are thrown in a room where a man in a white lab coat tells them (in complex sciency type vocabulary) that they are test subjects on their new AI system. They have had little chips in their heads since they were born. The chips have learned all of what they have learned. Just like a brain. So instead of trying to develope AI way 1: humans studying computers
the government lab is using way
2: Computer studying humans
The man also tellss them that the software somehow made it out of the chips (BAD GUYS!) and has gotten itself into phsycal form. AKA a robot. (terminator style, with flesh and blood and junk, just not human. a cyborg basicaly) The cyborg has been running rampent doin all sorts of bad junk.
(this is where I need a reason for the kids to escape. Maybe the kids escape because the government needs to kil them for some reason. I dont know, help!)
So the kids escape and decide to take matters into thier own hands. They somehow feel responsible for the cyborgs deeds and so they are on a quest to seek and destroy. But its not that simple. They realize that this is one crafty sucker. But they do have an advantage. They can foresee the cyborgs next move. Thier only problem is finding out which one of thier chips is the cyborgs. (that was really hard to explain but just try to see it)
Respond!
It starts out in a futuristic world where two teenage buddies are on a school feild trip. These kids are way smarter than the other kids and so their kind of in their own little world. They are touring a futuristic super-computer lab. (or something along those lines) One of the kids makes eye contact with thier teacher and sees her mouth, "Sorry," In seconds, the two are being physically forced into another region of the lab. One of the boys managed to read a sing labled, "Artificial Inteligence" They are thrown in a room where a man in a white lab coat tells them (in complex sciency type vocabulary) that they are test subjects on their new AI system. They have had little chips in their heads since they were born. The chips have learned all of what they have learned. Just like a brain. So instead of trying to develope AI way 1: humans studying computers
the government lab is using way
2: Computer studying humans
The man also tellss them that the software somehow made it out of the chips (BAD GUYS!) and has gotten itself into phsycal form. AKA a robot. (terminator style, with flesh and blood and junk, just not human. a cyborg basicaly) The cyborg has been running rampent doin all sorts of bad junk.
(this is where I need a reason for the kids to escape. Maybe the kids escape because the government needs to kil them for some reason. I dont know, help!)
So the kids escape and decide to take matters into thier own hands. They somehow feel responsible for the cyborgs deeds and so they are on a quest to seek and destroy. But its not that simple. They realize that this is one crafty sucker. But they do have an advantage. They can foresee the cyborgs next move. Thier only problem is finding out which one of thier chips is the cyborgs. (that was really hard to explain but just try to see it)
Respond!
