Gloom, Romance, and War...

[Nessy~!]

Chapter One: The Beginning
The Crystal Cave was growing dark, and Claire shivered slightly in fear. A flood was raging through, but it managed to bypass Crystal Cave. An evil laughter filled the air. Then came the fire. It caught on some tress and jumped from trees, to grass, to… wolves. Claire covered her head with her paws. She couldn’t watch. Damn god. Why did he have to do this to her? All she wanted was for her misery to end, but that was NOT what the god, Teufel, had in mind. He was keen on destruction.
Claire’s mother was trying to stop Teufel, for she was a god also, but she was not strong enough to save everything.
“Mother, save-“ Claire was cut off as the earthquake started. The last thing she remembered was a huge crystal heading straight for her as she cried.

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Chapter Two: Lycan & Berlin
When Claire woke up, she didn’t know where she was. A dusty sign read “Lycan”. Wait- she could read? But- Claire was a wolf! She had a pack! That was when Claire remembered. The end of the war. The very short war, Teufel’s War. Claire looked down at herself. She was… different. She now stood on two feet and was wearing a loin cloth. A pearl necklace with a crystal moon charm on it adorned her furred neck. Claire looked down at her stomach. Bits of crystal was still stuck in it. Then Claire noticed a piece of parchment and a bow with a pack of arrows laying beside her. She picked up the parchment. It read-

Dear Au Claire De La Lune;
I’m so sorry, daughter, for your loss. This place was the only place I could find you put you in and save you. I managed to save Teoamn’s pack, they are waging a war. I also managed to save Charm.
Here is a bow you can use to protect yourself, if need be. I have already entered your mind and taught you how to use it, as well as how to read, write, talk, and other things. Use this bow wisely; it may have been made by a goddess but that doesn’t mean it can survive everything. And the arrows I have provided you with are made from WindRunner’s feathers from her neck, wings and tail. She survived also, the tough gal. I’m sorry I couldn’t do more for you.
Love,
Mother.

Claire stared at the parchment for a while. Then she rolled it up, stuck it behind her ear like a human would with a pencil. She picked up the bow and strapped the pack of arrows onto her back. Claire then looked around, not sure of where to go. Finally, she saw a sign that read “Two miles to Berlin”. She didn’t know where or what Berlin was, but she ahd to start somewhere. She walked, a bit wobbly, on two legs toward this “Berlin”.
Lycan was a dusty place; and it looked like a disaster hit this place as well as Moonbeam Outcove and her wolven world she once knew. But she often heard people talking about “The End” But she had no clue what that was. There were humans here, vampires, werewolves… everything. But what was she? Claire still considered herself a wolf.
Finally, Claire found this Berlin place. It didn’t look to different from everywhere else.

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Chapter Three: Survival & A friend
Claire knew she had to find shelter, food, and a source of water in order to survive. So she wandered around this Berlin area, looking for a place to build a den. She found a nice forest, and wandered into it, looking for a stream. What she found was sort of a stream. It was a river, running in circles. Claire walked through the river and into the middle of the area, and began digging straight down.
After four or five hours, she had a completed house. There was a room for sleeping, a room for storing food and water, and a room for storing everything else. Claire sighed. Now, she needed to gather food. Claire retrieved her bow and arrows, then went off hunting. She ended up with two deer and an elk before starting back to her new home. But… she ran into a very hungry bear who was eyeing her food. And the bear… could talk!
“Food…” He said. Claire growled, setting down her bow and arrows. “My food, stay away from it, horrible creature.” She snarled. She’d had one experience with bears before it, and it wasn’t the best one. An image of Shadowfire and herself tearing through the Black & White, running from bears, flashed through her mind. The bear jumped at her, but Claire dodged easily, then, running on four feet, charged the bear herself, knocking the bear down, and pinning him to the ground.
To Claire’s surprise, the bear started to cry. “Me hungry,” He bawled. Claire wasn’t sure what to think. She jumped off and stood up. The bear slowly rose to his feet as well. “I want friend.” He stated, looking at Claire. “Friend?” He asked. Claire hesitated. “Friend.” She agreed, patting the poor bear’s arm. “I will be right back.” She added, picking up the elk and one deer, letting the bear have the other deer.
Claire put the deer and elk into the food and water storage room, before running back out to her new friend. “I’m Claire.” She said. “Me is Garde.” He replied. “Show you my house?” Garde asked her. Claire nodded. “Sure.” She said. Garde grinned, his smile full of razor sharp teeth. Then he started jogging toward his house. Claire followed.
Garde’s house was a big, two room rock cave. One room was empty, and the other room was full of treasures he had found. Claire smiled as she looked around. It was always good to have a friend.

[Malum]

((I like. Very interesting. But you could have some more minor detail. For example: at the part where she builds her house, you could mention what she was feeling at the time, maybe add in a metaphor or something.
Keep going, good luck!))

[Nessy~!]

(I'm just making it up as I go, its kinda crappy, but...)

[Malum]

((Good story. Just needs detail. Since you're making it up as you go I'll refrain from making comments, sorry))

[Nessy~!]

(No, its fine... But I'm going to revise it later and I'll be asking for alot of help.)

[Malum]

((Alright, until then I'll keep quiet))