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Sunset
May 10, 2007 9:48:34 GMT -5
Post by ♥Lar Rackell♥ on May 10, 2007 9:48:34 GMT -5
The chilling wind quietly roared as it came around the corner of the house. A light post in the distance, having yet to turn on, squeaked occasionally as it swayed from side to side. A couple kids roughhoused in the corner of the yard, yelling at eachother as they broke the rules. The tiny, yellow family mutt sniffed around the yard digging at non existant grass. The young neighborhood cat sat on the fence, watching a few lonely birds quietly carry on their conversation and ignore the rookie beside them.
The sun set behind the house as the squeaking lamp finally turned on. A family of quails scurried by, making beautiful whobble whobble noise to eachother which kept them in line. The wind continued to whistle and quietly talked to the young writer, telling stories of beyond the mountains that shaped their journey. The girl continued to write until the time was called for her to rest. taking a final glance at the beauty around her, she said "Goodnight."
(5/9/2007 sunset in my backyard.)
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Sunset
May 10, 2007 15:35:22 GMT -5
Post by Mayhem on May 10, 2007 15:35:22 GMT -5
Beautiful, Lar.
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Sunset
May 20, 2007 10:33:56 GMT -5
Post by Malum on May 20, 2007 10:33:56 GMT -5
Nice. If all of everyone's stories had detail like that about each and every setting books would be a lot more enjoyable to read. Not too long, not too short.
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